I think that a large city would be my favourite place to live. Large cities have a lot more to offer, take Toronto for example. Don’t you think that they have more people living in Toronto than some smaller place like Thessalon? So, in a large city than a small city or countryside, there are a lot more stores, lots of schools and very good hospitals and medical help. Think about the roads, bridges, houses, and apartments. Don’t you think a large city might be stronger or more stable than a small town or the countryside?
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Jennifer,
You have a topic sentence, reasons with examples and a closing sentence. You have added questions and good vocabulary (offer, medical help, stable)
Could you re-write your topic sentence? We did this in class on friday. I know you were absent. Feel free to ask a peer or an adult for help if you need! I look forward to reading your final draft!
Nice 👍 blog and I agree with you living in a large city would be awesome 😎😎. There is a lot of people in Toronto so you could meet a lot of nice kind people